Practising Happiness!!! Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku & Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow...and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW..
'shuffling through sheets of dark past' - what a fantastic image..and one we must all do..Jae
Ooh, I echo jaerose here: that turn of phrase is stunning imagery. Thank you!
shuffling through sheets of dark past..sounds intriguing - a beautiful imagery
Ah, people being consumed by life. So terrible and yet so alluring...Well done!
Oh, I am feeling that one. Amazing and excellent. That last line has me feeling like I am walking through sheets of cold wind.
Excellent. Takes into the mind of panderer.
She needs to come out of the dark past.. This haiku thing is really a challenge and you are mastering it
What an imagery created here!! The old hand going through her rough dark past!! Sort of echoes in the ears.
fantastic image in a wonderfully written haiku..thanks for sharing with osw...pete
The shuffling through sheets of dark past is brilliant :)
go for light..bright Haiku...
Very clever Haiku! Your words evoke in me, sympathy and intrigue for the aging panderer.
'shuffling through the sheets of dark past', very subtle way of showing the angst =)
Tautly built around the first word. Good one this.
LOL. almost too easy. But I don't write Haiku. My short story is a continuing serial, and these words just didn't fit for where I wanted to go next.I liked this though. Simple and deep.Thanks for sharing.......dhole